http://robinhood0211.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/winchesters-kids-on-the-mend/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Wed, 20 Aug 2008 17:55:35 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=MU http://robinhood0211.wordpress.com/2008/04/16/winchesters-kids-on-the-mend/#comment-7 chris horrie Tue, 06 May 2008 22:35:31 +0000 http://robinhood0211.wordpress.com/?p=7#comment-7 What'sthe story? This is basically just a free advertisement. People won't pay to read adverts. The problem with your journalism is that you don't seem to entirely grasp the difference between PR on the one hand, and journalism on the other. But it is reasonably well written I suppose. Try a bit of attack journalism in the style of say Emile Zola (look it up). Most people on this course wouldn't know the difference between Gianfranco Zola and Emile Zola. But all of that is gonna change now that I am here! What’sthe story? This is basically just a free advertisement. People won’t pay to read adverts. The problem with your journalism is that you don’t seem to entirely grasp the difference between PR on the one hand, and journalism on the other. But it is reasonably well written I suppose. Try a bit of attack journalism in the style of say Emile Zola (look it up). Most people on this course wouldn’t know the difference between Gianfranco Zola and Emile Zola. But all of that is gonna change now that I am here!

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